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If tears could write a story, then this is written for you.
Please excuse the sorrow that will naturally flow through.
They will write the memories, ones of wrong and right.
Also leaving a brand, of the laughter and the fight.

The times we did embrace, tears will trace these too.
Of sorrow and of happiness, my tears will write for you.
I cannot cry you back, impossible this may seem.
But you have live and died, at last your soul has been.

Every breath I take, it is harder than the first.
Leaving me immobile with a heart about to burst.
Missing you is painful, more so than any death.
But this cannot bring you back, you have taken your final breath.

If tears could show emotion, then many will flow on.
The feeling of close love, a feeling that’s never wrong.
You were the best friend that ever has been to me.
Now you’re not here, your soul is finally free.

Pain rips through me just as does a flood.
My soul is missing a piece and icy is my blood.
If only were here to sing with me today.
And hold me close in content, I’d never go astray.

You eased my every fear, no longer did they haunt.
But death was good for you, the devil looks to taunt.
I feel a flood of calm, when blow the summer breeze.
This feels so like you ad this my soul does ease.

2 people on this earth, closer than soul and heart.
To know you’re no longer here, my heart just rips apart.
No longer to whisper secrets ones of truth and depth.
You’re too far gone now, out of reach and breadth.

If tears could write a story, mine have written one for you.
I cannot force them back anymore, they have fallen through.
One last message though, before the books complete.
I love you and I miss you, even this death cant defeat.
done for a friend who is gone
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ZakSaturday2468 Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My dear, Rose... I thought of one of my best friends on here who committed suicide when reading this ;; Very touching and on point
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student General Artist
Thank you but who is Rose?
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ZakSaturday2468 Featured By Owner 16 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem.. And my friend on here who couldn't go on anymore two years ago as of the 25th... Some were so rude about it, they said that they didn't believe she died so "pics or it didn't happen"
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QuietTigress Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought of my favorite cousin who died of a brain tumor while reading this. Though it bears much pain... this is beautifully written!
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Student General Artist
I am really sorry to hear it :huggle: Thank you for the lovely comment.
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Loyalty1998 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This...why didn't I read this...it's just so sad, yet so beautiful...
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you my friend
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poetryprince Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
this poem seems to flow with a truth that is seldom felt by most people.... does the person know you wrote it for them?
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Student General Artist
*looks away*
They are dead...
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poetryprince Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
i apologize for bringing up the memory, i was reading that the person was alive in the other comments placed under it.... please accept my sincere regret at their passing and once again my apology
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