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If tears could write a story, then this is written for you.
Please excuse the sorrow that will naturally flow through.
They will write the memories, ones of wrong and right.
Also leaving a brand, of the laughter and the fight.

The times we did embrace, tears will trace these too.
Of sorrow and of happiness, my tears will write for you.
I cannot cry you back, impossible this may seem.
But you have live and died, at last your soul has been.

Every breath I take, it is harder than the first.
Leaving me immobile with a heart about to burst.
Missing you is painful, more so than any death.
But this cannot bring you back, you have taken your final breath.

If tears could show emotion, then many will flow on.
The feeling of close love, a feeling that’s never wrong.
You were the best friend that ever has been to me.
Now you’re not here, your soul is finally free.

Pain rips through me just as does a flood.
My soul is missing a piece and icy is my blood.
If only were here to sing with me today.
And hold me close in content, I’d never go astray.

You eased my every fear, no longer did they haunt.
But death was good for you, the devil looks to taunt.
I feel a flood of calm, when blow the summer breeze.
This feels so like you ad this my soul does ease.

2 people on this earth, closer than soul and heart.
To know you’re no longer here, my heart just rips apart.
No longer to whisper secrets ones of truth and depth.
You’re too far gone now, out of reach and breadth.

If tears could write a story, mine have written one for you.
I cannot force them back anymore, they have fallen through.
One last message though, before the books complete.
I love you and I miss you, even this death cant defeat.
done for a friend who is gone
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SForSkitty Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Student General Artist
What?
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SForSkitty Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Idek. So emotional. x3
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Student General Artist
... that's what happens when your friend does suicide
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SForSkitty Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Trust me, I know how it feels.
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Mhmm, you feel dead
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SForSkitty Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Exactly.
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Yep
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bettybett Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
That was deep. Gurl I getting emotional.
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you sweetie
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ZakSaturday2468 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My dear, Rose... I thought of one of my best friends on here who committed suicide when reading this ;; Very touching and on point
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you but who is Rose?
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ZakSaturday2468 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem.. And my friend on here who couldn't go on anymore two years ago as of the 25th... Some were so rude about it, they said that they didn't believe she died so "pics or it didn't happen"
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QuietTigress Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought of my favorite cousin who died of a brain tumor while reading this. Though it bears much pain... this is beautifully written!
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Student General Artist
I am really sorry to hear it :huggle: Thank you for the lovely comment.
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Loyalty1998 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This...why didn't I read this...it's just so sad, yet so beautiful...
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you my friend
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poetryprince Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
this poem seems to flow with a truth that is seldom felt by most people.... does the person know you wrote it for them?
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Student General Artist
*looks away*
They are dead...
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poetryprince Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
i apologize for bringing up the memory, i was reading that the person was alive in the other comments placed under it.... please accept my sincere regret at their passing and once again my apology
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Student General Artist
It is okay
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poetryprince Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
thank you for attempting to ease my feelings, which i understand must be nothing compared to your feelings of loss.
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Student General Artist
No, just drop it please, it hurts to talk about it. Change subject
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poetryprince Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
i was reading about you finding and egg,...that was a beautiful story
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you - I will never forget it
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Zylund Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, my. That, was a stunning poem! It flowed very nicely, and it was very emotional, and very well written c:
I love it n_n
I mean, I am sorry to be so happy about this when it is a very sad poem, and was written for a sad reason (which, I am very sorry to hear for your loss, by the way D: ).
I have no doubts that you will continue the great work :3
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student General Artist
*bows head*
Thank you - I just wish I knew what he would have thought if I had shown him alive.

But we cannot change the past, only hope better for the future.

~
It is okay, you can say whatever, I don't mind. I hope to impress you more often in the future.
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Zylund Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You are most welcome, It would have been nice for that, but like you said, past is past, and there is nothing we can do to change it.

Alright ^.^
I look forward to it :3
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student General Artist
You are correct.
Thank you
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Zylund Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime n_n
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:iconguarded-stallion:
Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student General Artist
Would you like a poem or traditional piece?
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Zylund Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You wish to make me a piece?
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student General Artist
Sure, I can do so most willingly.
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hetalia-and-naruto Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
Cry forever Cry forever Cry forever Cry forever Cry forever Cry forever Cry forever Cry forever Cry forever Cry forever Cry forever 
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student General Artist
O.O oh I am sorry
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hetalia-and-naruto Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
Its fine. I'm used to feeling sad.
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:iconguarded-stallion:
Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student General Artist
*hugs* I didn't mean for the poem to have this big of an effect
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hetalia-and-naruto Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
A poem that amazing needs an even bigger effect.
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student General Artist
What do you mean
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KellySeale Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wow. this is deep and intense with emotion. :'(
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student General Artist
It is okay I just miss him
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RaphAndRoll Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
At least they are not fully gone. At least not if you let them go. Beautiful poetry, my friend
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you for that reassurance. I am glad you like it
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Really amazing depth and flow, it just was so....real.
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you so much. This is what I try to bring into the picture - Just pity it is real life
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well we write through the pain Ay!
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh most definitely
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thumbs Up 
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student General Artist
^^
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TheFreeHuntress Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry about your friend. This is very well written.
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